Just About Us - J1: near rhymes
Songs From Home - J1: very homey
Corner Bar - J1: good rhyme scheme. J2: Good story line with emotional appeal. Good meter/rhyme. I would re-position the chorus after 2nd verse and 4th verse and end it with the 5th verse to create better flow of song. J3: good idea, good story, too many verses. Try combining 1st and 2nd verse into one verse with more impact.
So Many Dreams - J2: Has emotional impact. Good structure/ rhyme/meter.
Salesman - J 2: Good form. Rhyme scheme could use a little help. Interesting point of view of the life of a salesman.
Under The Canopy - J2: Really like the lyrics. Rhyme and meter works, but unsure about the form and structure - there is no chorus or bridge, but could work.
A Yard Full of Weeds - J3: Good imagery, cleverly written, original
Nothing Changes Life Like Living - J3: Too long to the chorus. Move chorus up to after 2nd verse